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February 4th, 2014 07:55 AM #1
3. The Sorceress and the Foreigner3: ‘A,B,C NAMING X’ Form
Genre of Story: Fantasy
Time Period/Location: Alternative Italian Renaissance world (think 1400s)
Brief Plot: A shapeshifter utilizes her powers to make a profit from selling secrets whilst trying to find out who killed her mentor so she can enact revenge.
Names of Current Characters: Piera (main protagonist), Nunzia and Gasparo
Sorceress: Red, wavy hair and light blue eyes. Heritage: think ancient Greece. She is a wealthy courtesan, charming, cunning and her motives are quite unclear. She has been on this earth for a long time but still looks like she is in her late twenties. She befriends the main protagonist and there is a strong bond between the two of them. She encourages the main protagonist's feelings of contempt and anger.
Foreigner: Think Turkish. He is a political envoy for his court, charming, youthful and witty. He loves to dress colorfully and has a great interest in rare objects. He is also great friends with the master spy Gasparo... And there are rumors he is a pirate on the side...
Immediate Family (if relevant):
Foreigner: A sister who he mentions to the protagonist.
Already Considered (if relevant):
Sorceress: Sabina, Thalassa, Clymene (it might be the one)
Foreigner: Alatan, Iskender
Anything else?: (Any other relevant information) For these two I'm hoping to find names that do not end with an 'a' or 'o'... Mainly because many of the secondary characters will...
Thanks!Ingrid | Kit | Esclarmonde | Alistair | Susanna | Emun
February 4th, 2014 06:38 PM #3
First of all, thank you for using the layout! It is way easier to understand and help someone this way, and it's much less annoying than berries pleading for a random name, giving no info at all about the story.
Anyways, I liked these names for the Sorceress: Annora, Viveca/ Viveka, Rowena, Morwenna, Calixta/ Callixta, Beatrix/ Beatriz, Marguerite, Estelle/ Estella/ Estrella, Annika, Madelief, Zenobia, Zelia.
For the Foreigner - Ulrich, Erasmus/ Rasmus, Ragmar, Ambrose/ Emrys, Arland, Zephram, Kier, Cillian/ Killian, Malachy, Melchior, Ozias, Viktor/ Victor.
Best of luck! Sounds like just the type of book I'd like to read.Erin (Writer, Nerdfighter, Ravenclaw; Not expecting, just collecting)
(Adelaide, Betty, Cassia, Georgia, Ocean, Violet)
(Asher, Gabriel, Josiah, Oakley, Rowan, Wayland)
February 5th, 2014 01:21 AM #5
Thank you! Although I do like the names you have suggested I don't think they fit their backgrounds, personality yes.Ingrid | Kit | Esclarmonde | Alistair | Susanna | Emun
February 5th, 2014 03:13 AM #7Junior Member
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February 5th, 2014 11:54 AM #9
Last edited by renrose; February 5th, 2014 at 11:58 AM.~Boys~
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Sorry to anyone who read TSI. First draft was terrible. Second drafting now.