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February 4th, 2014 07:55 AM #1
3. The Sorceress and the Foreigner3: ‘A,B,C NAMING X’ Form
Genre of Story: Fantasy
Time Period/Location: Alternative Italian Renaissance world (think 1400s)
Brief Plot: A shapeshifter utilizes her powers to make a profit from selling secrets whilst trying to find out who killed her mentor so she can enact revenge.
Names of Current Characters: Piera (main protagonist), Nunzia and Gasparo
Sorceress: Red, wavy hair and light blue eyes. Heritage: think ancient Greece. She is a wealthy courtesan, charming, cunning and her motives are quite unclear. She has been on this earth for a long time but still looks like she is in her late twenties. She befriends the main protagonist and there is a strong bond between the two of them. She encourages the main protagonist's feelings of contempt and anger.
Foreigner: Think Turkish. He is a political envoy for his court, charming, youthful and witty. He loves to dress colorfully and has a great interest in rare objects. He is also great friends with the master spy Gasparo... And there are rumors he is a pirate on the side...
Immediate Family (if relevant):
Foreigner: A sister who he mentions to the protagonist.
Already Considered (if relevant):
Sorceress: Sabina, Thalassa, Clymene (it might be the one)
Foreigner: Alatan, Iskender
Anything else?: (Any other relevant information) For these two I'm hoping to find names that do not end with an 'a' or 'o'... Mainly because many of the secondary characters will...
Thanks!Ingrid | Kit | Susanna | Alistair
February 4th, 2014 06:38 PM #3
First of all, thank you for using the layout! It is way easier to understand and help someone this way, and it's much less annoying than berries pleading for a random name, giving no info at all about the story.
Anyways, I liked these names for the Sorceress: Annora, Viveca/ Viveka, Rowena, Morwenna, Calixta/ Callixta, Beatrix/ Beatriz, Marguerite, Estelle/ Estella/ Estrella, Annika, Madelief, Zenobia, Zelia.
For the Foreigner - Ulrich, Erasmus/ Rasmus, Ragmar, Ambrose/ Emrys, Arland, Zephram, Kier, Cillian/ Killian, Malachy, Melchior, Ozias, Viktor/ Victor.
Best of luck! Sounds like just the type of book I'd like to read.Erin (Writer, Nerdfighter, Ravenclaw; Not expecting, just collecting)
(Adelaide, Betty, Cassia, Georgia, Ocean, Violet)
(Asher, Gabriel, Josiah, Oakley, Rowan, Wayland)
February 5th, 2014 01:21 AM #5
Thank you! Although I do like the names you have suggested I don't think they fit their backgrounds, personality yes.Ingrid | Kit | Susanna | Alistair
February 5th, 2014 03:13 AM #7Junior Member
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February 5th, 2014 11:54 AM #9
Last edited by renrose; February 5th, 2014 at 11:58 AM.~Boys~
Jory Leander Atticus, August Eli Benedict, Casimir Mordecai Stewart,
Edmond John Meirion, Horatio Ethell Emery, Bram William Jasper,
Julian Remy Charles, Vasiliy Lochlan Michael.
Aira Rose ___, Eleni Fiorella Charlotte, Sylvia Sayuri Noor,
Merit Eleanora Adelaide, Clover Elodie Seraphine, Bridie Scarlett Viola,
Marguerite Cecilia Iris, Eilidh Clara Valentine.
Sorry to anyone who read TSI. First draft was terrible. Second drafting now.