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  1. #21
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    Apr 2013
    I like Mara. There's going to be a part where she reunites with another friend of her's. Mara could be that friend. I'd be bitter too if one of my friends was murdered.
    A teenage writer and name lover~
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  2. #23
    Join Date
    May 2013
    I agree completely. Mara is a good name, but I don't know if it's fitting for the main character. It would be good to incorporate it in using a secondary character as you are suggesting.
    “I read books when I was a kid, lots of books. Books always seemed like magic to me. They took you to the most amazing places. When I got older, I realized I couldn't find books that took me to all the places I wanted to go. To go to those places, I had to write some books myself.”
    ― Pat Murphy, The Wild Girls

    "Like everyone else, I am going to die. But the words – the words live on..."
    ― J. Michael Straczynski

  3. #25
    Join Date
    Jan 2012
    Married my best friend 5/11/13, mommy to Murron Lydia Genevieve 10/20

    Name crushes:
    Alice Hazel, Helena Faye,Cleora Beatrice,Gloria Charlotte, Sylvia Edith,Lior Inez
    Solomon Jace, Gideon Charles, Henry , Waylon, Arlo, Mordecai

  4. #27
    Join Date
    May 2013
    I like Mallory the best for this character. Mallory seems like a real person. I don't like it when authors use super plain names (unless it fits the character), but it also also annoys me when they try to make them over-dramatic sounding. Mallory sort of bridges that gap. It's not like Jennifer, but it isn't like Desdemona. (Sorry to all the people who liked that name, but seriously, who in the heck would name their kid that?)

  5. #29
    I'd say Mallory's your best bet... Cassandra's a nice name, but I tend to keep my characters' names short. Easier on the reader...

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