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Thread: Divergent BNG Part One
April 20th, 2013 09:01 AM #21
You are a sixteen-year-old girl named Penelope *Nelo* Jade Retter and you were born into the Erudite. You were raised up in the virtue of your faction Intelligence along with your siblings Anastasia*Anya* Ruth Retter -14, Graydon *Gray* Reed Retter-10 & Josiah *Joss* Arlo Retter-7 by your parents Steven Daniel & Melinda Alice Retter.
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Today is the day that you receive your Aptitude Test. They don't tell you this, but it isn't like an ordinary test. You walk into the room to find it empty except for a dentist-like chair in the center along with a machine and a petite lady. She will administer the test. She hooks you up to the machine, hands you a vial of clear liquid to drink and you are put under a simulation which the lady will monitor. The simulation will watch how your brain acts in given situations to detect which Faction you belong in. The test ends and the lady presents you with your results: You belong in Candor. You go home and try to decide which Faction you will choose the next day at the Ceremony. The aptitude test, you know, was simply to help guide you but you aren't sure what to do. To make it even worse, you aren't allowed to discuss your results with your family members.
You wake up the next morning with a clear mind and are thankful that you finally know which Faction you will choose. Later that day you arrive at the Choosing Ceremony and wait in line with the rest of the sixteen-year-olds. The man standing in the front of the large room with the microphone announces each teenager, one-by-one in alphabetical order. You start to daydream when you hear your name called. You walk to the center of the room where there are 5 large bowls representing each Faction. You are handed a knive with which you cut your hand and spill your blood into the bowl representing Erudite.
Directly after the Ceremony you are taken away with the rest of the new members of your new faction, though you know you aren't safe yet. You still have to make it through the Initiation before you are an official member. The bad part is, that if you fail Initiation, you become factionless (homeless). During Initiation you meet your best friend, Elizabeth *Liza* Rachel Warner . While you're somewhat reserved, she's loud and pushes you to do things you wouldn't normally do. You love having her around.
Luckily by the time Initiation is over, you are a proud member of the Erudite.♫ Danielle ♫
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