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  1. #1
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    May 2012
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    Question Elitist: Do you like my characters?

    Heroine's Family:
    -Keenan Rocero Perdue - 44 - Dad
    -Katrina Ayla Mitchell Perdue - 41- Mom
    -Sienna Gabriella Clarkson Perdue - 30 - Step-Mom
    -Kenneth Peter Perdue - 22 - Brother
    -Avalon Lenore Perdue - 16 - Heroine
    -Arabella Nadine Perdue - 16 - Twin Sister
    -Deion Troy Perdue - 12 - Brother
    -Reese Calla Perdue - 3 - Half-Sister

    Hero's Family:
    -Roan Loren Renier - 32 - Step-Dad
    -Reina Malia Rodriguez Ward Renier - 32 - Mom
    -Aaron Andrew Ward - 32 - Dad
    -Adrien Vincent Ward - 16 - Hero
    -Julia Skai Renier - 6 - Half-Sister
    Currently Loving:
    Adrien Vincent, Aaron Andrew, Roan Loren, Keenan Rocero, Kenneth Peter, Deion Troy
    Avalon Lenore, Arabella Nadine, Katrina Ayla, Sienna Gabriella, Reese Calla, Reina Malia, Julia Skai

  2. #3
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    I think that the names of your parents in the story are quite modern and could do with a tone-down, but otherwise they sound great. Also, think about the hero's mom's name: Reina Renier. I don't think these names go together as they seem too similar and confusing to the eye.
    Alice O'Dea, Simona Valentine, Link North, Eli Deacon, Benny Snowden
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  3. #5
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    I don't think Kenneth, Avalon, Arabella, Deion and Reese as siblings match each other at all... like, at all. They all sound like they're from different eras and even ethnicities. Also agree with the previous poster about Reina Renier. I can see that name lending itself to a LOT of typos.

  4. #7
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    Thanks so much for the suggestions. I agree with you guys on the Renier thing. It was the first one I thought of so I just kind of went with it. And on the names not really matching I agree with that alot too.
    Currently Loving:
    Adrien Vincent, Aaron Andrew, Roan Loren, Keenan Rocero, Kenneth Peter, Deion Troy
    Avalon Lenore, Arabella Nadine, Katrina Ayla, Sienna Gabriella, Reese Calla, Reina Malia, Julia Skai

  5. #9
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    Oh, and any suggestions for different names?
    Currently Loving:
    Adrien Vincent, Aaron Andrew, Roan Loren, Keenan Rocero, Kenneth Peter, Deion Troy
    Avalon Lenore, Arabella Nadine, Katrina Ayla, Sienna Gabriella, Reese Calla, Reina Malia, Julia Skai

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